Ana - I can't offer you proffessional advice, but it really is a gorgeous shot!! I love the lighting. I think I would like it better if the white corner in the top right corner was a black background instead or somehow even if it could be eliminated? But that's just my personal taste! It just seems a little disctracting.. But that's being picky - personally, I think it's a gorgeous shot!!
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It's a great shot!.. Although I would have liked it more if the light had come from the side... I don't like it when light comes from the front. But that's my personal opinion
And there's too much light on the background.. You focus a lot on that...
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critique? uhh well, i kinda am not getting the eye make-up and how about putting the light at the side for more drama
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And there's too much light on the background.. You focus a lot on that...
Otherwise great! And a lovely model!
and you accesesories on your had and galance is right. like this
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