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I need professional advice on this shot.Please provide any kind of critique, as long as i have something to learn from it.Thanks very much in advance!

Ana

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:icondonbranz:
1st of all, I think it's really really nice :D

critique? uhh well, i kinda am not getting the eye make-up and how about putting the light at the side for more drama :D

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ok, about the makeup, it's all around the eyes, that's why it look weird, i wanted it to look weird:P .Thanks for the comment!

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Edward A. Murphy
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Ana - I can't offer you proffessional advice, but it really is a gorgeous shot!! I love the lighting. I think I would like it better if the white corner in the top right corner was a black background instead or somehow even if it could be eliminated? But that's just my personal taste! It just seems a little disctracting.. But that's being picky - personally, I think it's a gorgeous shot!!

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:iconnefretizm:
very nice!

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:icondonbranz:
You're welcome :D

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It's a great shot!.. Although I would have liked it more if the light had come from the side... I don't like it when light comes from the front. But that's my personal opinion :)

And there's too much light on the background.. You focus a lot on that...

Otherwise great! And a lovely model! :)
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really beautiful face Ana, but your make up a bit seen bad. You can make some Photoshop efects on this to erease it. If you cant i can help you.

and you accesesories on your had and galance is right. like this :)
:iconbatetooz:
nice shot ever !!

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:iconthis-sunday-morning:
that's so sweet of you, thaks a lot!

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